|Reviews for Life...|
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
| obsidian katana chapter 1 . 11/27/2002
nice poem, but i think that you can win in the battle life!
if you have a goal
and fight for a worthy cause,
you can win in life
(a haiku i made up for you right on the spot, hope you like it)
good job, anyway! keep writing!
| The Crazy Cricket chapter 1 . 10/14/2002
I like how it's short and to the point. Good work!
| Keriana Williams chapter 1 . 10/7/2002
Very true...Very, very true...
| Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 9/19/2002
The one, Queen Dagger Tribal, down below me a few reviews, that's my happy account. This one is my depressing account. I have to review this again. I think this is so true. It's short, simpl, and straight to the point of this damned world. It explains exactly what I think of it. This is perfect just the way it is. I luv it.
| andjudar chapter 1 . 7/13/2002
hey there, what a touching poem! i can totally relate to it! keep it up!
| Linmenel chapter 1 . 6/12/2002
Ohh! sad! I feel so...so hopeless! If thats the message then awesome job becasue my good mood is totally ruined now! lol I'm just kidding. Its good stuff..I'm going to read some more!
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 5/22/2002
a bit depressing but I like it... I think it is really clever! )
| Daredee chapter 1 . 5/8/2002
I'll tell you what i think...
(i think thats all that needs to be said)
| Marisa chapter 1 . 4/30/2002
I like it. Short but so true. You only neede four lines to explain it. I love it. You are so good. You should write more!
| Red Rose Petals chapter 1 . 4/29/2002
This is really good! You should try writing a haiku. They're only 3 lines long. 5 syllables on the 1st line, 7 syllables on the 2nd line, and 5 syllables on the last line. Try it. I wrote lots. They're fun.
| Dark Nation2 chapter 1 . 4/28/2002
I love it! Short, sweet, and concise. Defintely a good one. Thanks for your review by the way, and toodles! _
| Arbobug2 chapter 1 . 4/28/2002
One word...WOW. You are good, I have to agree I like short poetry to. :) Maybe you could check out mine to, :) THanks
p.s. Keep it up you are defiently a good writer.
| DarknessAngel3 chapter 1 . 4/28/2002
this is great, it doesn't matter that it's short!
| Also Known As chapter 1 . 4/28/2002
4 lines was enough for this! Too true, too true. And... I'd probably at least try to say more on why I liked this, but it's late and I'm tired. Anyway, I liked it.