I liked that a LOT!

Awww...that's sad. Very well written though, and your rhyming style was good. It all flowed nicely too. *sighs* Is this written based on a personal experience or did you just write it? Cuz if it was a personal experience it sounds like it was pretty bad...those kind of break ups suck. v_v I particulary enjoy the demon references in this song...like it's tormenting his soul...very nice. All in all, I really liked it. Magnificent work. :)

Wow. This is soooo good. It's very moving and sad. Do you have the guitar chords to go along with it?(and also for "what the f*ck is wrong with me"? If so, please send them to . Keep up the good work!

A very melancholy song you have there.. nice work..

Sad and touching, but also very good.