lmao. sweet ending! i love the twist! a very nifty way of ending a potentially sweet emotion-tugging romantic poem.

*Laugh* Well, that was a rather unexpected ending. Cute... but... hilarious? VERY much enjoyed! _ It was nice to laugh about a love poem, for once. Thank you for writing this!

wow, i thought i had read bad writing before. your should just write backstreetboyz fanfic, thats where you belong.

Man that is deep in a weird way. I like the tempo of your poem and the little surprise at the end. This is either a funny story about a guy and his squid or a deeper unrequited love situation. Poety makes you think! Cool.

Chirst, you are weird. A squid?

*LMAO* I thought this was going to be about a person that loved someone with 6 fingers or toes, which is a strange poem idea already. But you upped the ante. Very amusing!

*snrf!* Your sense of humor is so beautiful...so twisted and strange, like a bizarre and fragile flower...;D

Illegitami non carborundum, dude. ;D We need more weird squid-lovin' poems.

::blinks twice:: Riiiiiiight...O_o

This one was worse than the last one I read. Don't quit your day-job. Please stop. Please...the more you write, the less appealing it is. But to each his own, if he can hold his own.

I've never read anything this beautiful before...it brought a tear to my eye.

Keep up the great work!

that was so beutiful, it brought tears to my eyes, finally there is someone out there i can realte to

That was beautiful.