|Reviews for you could jump off a cliff|
| Joel's Baybee Gurl chapter 1 . 9/30/2002
This is so beautiful, I keep wondering how you weave your stories and poems together like this. I mean, your writing is so good, it's almost corporeal, you can almost feel what the words truly mean, you can feel the way he moves her thoughts. It's so good, keep up the good work.
| Mendelssohn chapter 1 . 5/3/2002
Flabbergasting! I really liked -
"How beautiful is beautiful?
The eye of the beholder-
Transfixed on his bent back.
I decide, or anyway,
he decides for me."
The range of emotions you explore is absolutely amazing!
| Newkirk's Heroes chapter 1 . 4/30/2002
I love the last stanza...it's perfect for the poem..."how beautiful is beautiful?". Such a wonderful sentiment! Love it as usual!
| kris chapter 1 . 4/29/2002
wow...this reminds me of what i think about a kid in *my* english class...::melts::...awesome work, keep it up :-)