Reviews for Nightmares
Gracefulfalling chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
Sweet, very similar to my nightmares.
Kuroi-hime chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
very good, well written. i'm so sure it could be published -.-
IcyFlames chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
The past has hurtful things in it, some just shouldn't be dredged up; but no one can control their dreams and emotions-containing emoptions is very very bad. (trust me, i've done it b4) Anyways, i'll stop rambling and just say what i meant to: Excellent poem
futagoat02 chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
i like... i dunno why, just like...

baibaiyukie
matt13086 chapter 1 . 7/13/2003
this is a really neat story. Liked how you described yourself after you had the nightmare.
dragon-slayer64 chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Wow, excellent poem. It reminds me of Ryoko from Tenchi Muyo...
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 9/20/2002
This was incredibly sad and scary, because it reminds us that pain doesn't release us during sleep... Great poem, I loved it.
I Am Jake chapter 1 . 5/2/2002
This is my first review that I'm going to give you, so I will make it as non-arbatrary as possible. (I know that arbratary is not spelled right) The only fault that I can find is the first line of the poem is what I use to say in a bed time prayer

"Now I lay me down to sleep

I pray the lord my soal to keep

If I die before I wake

I pray the lord my sol to take"-I know that sol is not spelled right
Zidane 2003 FFIX chapter 1 . 5/1/2002
excelent poem!
KGJ chapter 1 . 5/1/2002
Not easy to break free of the past, is it?