Reviews for Sorrow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey great poem, I'm adding it to my favourites now... i hope you get the girl in the end ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's so beautiful and honest. Awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tis sad. People do not work logically, which is why they never understand that someone doesn't deserve them. As for your poetry, it's a bit sappy at the end and depressing towards the beginning. Not too orderly(You switch from referring to her to a sense that you're talking to her three paragraphs in). It's pretty good, I'd give it a 7.5 out of 10 if I were to rate it. |
![]() ![]() That was very good, and also, very believable. Good job! ;] |