Reviews for Sorrow
Retrojunkie chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
Hey great poem, I'm adding it to my favourites now... i hope you get the girl in the end ;)
Little Miss Shadow chapter 1 . 8/29/2002
That's so beautiful and honest. Awesome.
Efils God chapter 1 . 9/17/2000
Tis sad. People do not work logically, which is why they never understand that someone doesn't deserve them. As for your poetry, it's a bit sappy at the end and depressing towards the beginning. Not too orderly(You switch from referring to her to a sense that you're talking to her three paragraphs in). It's pretty good, I'd give it a 7.5 out of 10 if I were to rate it.
Slick chapter 1 . 9/17/2000
That was very good, and also, very believable. Good job! ;]