Reviews for Train
Toireasa chapter 1 . 11/11/2002
Love it. The imagery is all wonderful,; I particularly love the ending. .~

Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
First piece of poetry? Very nicely done. I wish you would write more.~CT
absolute0 chapter 1 . 8/24/2002
Your first piece of poetry? Well, you've done a good job in this one. You make nice use of images... i can imagine myself being in a train while reading this poem. Write more poems!
MandELLA chapter 1 . 5/28/2002
I like the way this flows. I also liked the way you worded some of your lines..." Headphones and Handphones" Very creative!
visiondust chapter 1 . 5/6/2002
pretty good for a first try

i quite like the who idea. it's so simple... wonder why i never thought of it before