|Reviews for The Taste of Blood|
| Baby Moony chapter 22 . 7/5/2006
HEY! YOU! UPDATE! NOW! Please? XD And -please- explain some stuff...it's kina confusing...what's a Chosen? And what happened to Raven? Glagh...I don't know what I'm talking about...To tired...But it was nice, please update soon. XD )
| Caden Torseck chapter 22 . 2/25/2004
Very interesting vampire story. A couple things you may want to try:
Putting your chapters together and separating them by "-" or "" to show scene changes. Chapters are usually longer.
Stay away from he said, she said.
You have a lot of dialogue, but I'm sure the characters don't just stand still while they're talking. Start looking at people as they carry conversations. They move! Their eyes, their head, little scratches, feet movement, nervous twitches, etc. It's a thing to make your character's more realistic. D
Anyway, if you have the time check out another vampire story, Blood War Chronicles. It's a story I'm doing with Melii, author of Born of Blood, a story which you've read.
Overall, your story's really interesting. Look forward to seeing how you plan on concluding it.
| pewpewpera fah wef chapter 22 . 1/19/2004
Ah, what, no more! *strangles your muse* come on, work damn it! *my own muse tackles me before I hurt my hands and wont be able to type*
How did Raven come back? What's the deal with that and the freaky girl he killed? WHY why why why why *is hauled off kicking and screaming*
| pewpewpera fah wef chapter 18 . 1/19/2004
You. Are. EVIL!
| Midnight Predatortoo lazy to log in chapter 17 . 1/19/2004
hehehe, I hate logging in every time I want to submit a review. I'm too lazy.
*cries* You killed off Raven! Wah, how could you? meanie...
MUST FINISH READING!
| Dark Auro chapter 22 . 7/28/2003
hey wut up kool story itz really interesting i hope that u update it soon i hated the fact dat raven is sorta like evil but the story is still awsome i hope dat u update soon i mean ur story is really kick ass good
latez i hope dat u review it really soon itz nice sorry 4 botherin u like this latez
| Azalai chapter 22 . 6/24/2003
(growls, throws curses around her white room then huffs down, panting) It is time I come back to writing. Expect the newest chapter of Vampire Ghosts sometime. BUT-
Don't expect it to be good.
Anyway, these are really great chapters, and write more or I'll force you to spend a week with Tom. Mind you, only Tom. All four at a time would result in cardiac arrest on your part. (big ((insert adjective here)) smile)
| annie chapter 21 . 5/14/2003
You are truly evil.. killing off Raven and then leaving readers pining for the next chapter again! haha but aside from that, I think your writing is exceptionally well done and I couldn't believe I have never read this story before.. Keep up the good work! )
| Sereg'wethrin chapter 21 . 5/9/2003
holy crap...i haven't reviewed in so long...and you haven't updated much! no excuse! you better get the next chapter up! btw...this is 'me' only with a different name. Anywho, great chapters, update soon!
| Crims chapter 21 . 5/5/2003
_ Yay! You added another chapter! I can't wait for the next update. Yer stories are all so good XD
((Randomism: Did you know that the name Shada means pelican? o.O; It's a cool name, but it kinda has a funny meaning...or maybe it's just me...anyways...))
| Xelena chapter 21 . 4/27/2003
yeah! shadow's back! woohoo! whoopie! yeah- whe! anyways, i still really like this story- please continue soon.
| bloodythorns chapter 21 . 4/26/2003
I really like your story please write more.
| Midnights Song chapter 20 . 4/22/2003
this is really good. i loved reading it and can't wait for more.
| neotabrina chapter 20 . 4/13/2003
Hey there! This is Neotabrina and I just read all 20 chapters you've written so far! Please write more...it's so hard to find good writers these days!
| Webby chapter 20 . 3/16/2003
Another great chapter! Continue! o_o! I haven't been in here in a while and I checked back ;; but continue, please!