I like it! It's written very beautifully.

Stunning work. I love the first stanza.

You have great talent!

Hey! I can go! I just don't know what day day. I have to work it out with okaasan because my brother is too young to go (he'll get fussy!) AND i forgot how lost i can get there! ; Ne, i need to register and get my badge and that crap too. (If i get the badge it'll probably have my nick-name on it and, of course, my real name underneat. Err...i'll talk to you on im in June because i don't want to say my real name...But i think you know my first name...;;) byeeee

I'm the first to review! _ Anyway, this was wonderful, Shi-chan! I simply love your writing