|Reviews for ravel|
| Jade6 chapter 1 . 6/2/2002
Oh WoW! What imagery! This is amazingly good! )
| Newkirk's Heroes chapter 1 . 5/29/2002
"the little ship of me
that rolls delicately on its swells
is sometime?s lost in the fog
of memory?s long-empty shells"
I love that line! God, you're so talented. I have to get my grandfather to translate your French poem so I can read it :). This one is so lovely!
| unexpected source chapter 1 . 5/6/2002
wow. i like it.
so tactful and corpuscular and lonely yet
beautiful. like to be lonely is to be beautiful
(nothing to do with the poem , just commentingon
the essence i get)
i like the wavesong, and the little ship of you,
and the night wind which stirs the curtains.
somewhat largely effecting and illusive. so tired. the review box is looking boxy.
although i like boxing.