Now this is quite the dimond among the rough. The standard of this tale is brillant and nothing of the spelling and grammer strikes me as wrong.

This has to be the first among the stories read here at the to actually get me to feel something.

I am envous of you mc, this is the standard of writting I hope to obtain one day. Keep up the good work.

Grim Writter

Excellent.

I feel quite privilleged to be the first to reveiw it and within it i fiind little or no fault.

Anyone who hasnt already, read this story!

Proffesionally written also. The only part which i found suitible but could be changed is the ending/last paragraph. I find it an appropriate cliche that he ends up in an institution.

Personally i would have preffered him to continue his life, still haunted by his visions of the victim. But again i say, best to leave sleeping dogs lie.