what a sweet poem. it made me smile and wish i had someone to write something like this to.

lol whahaha... show ur luv?how?lol yeah so who's this "poem" for?huh? i *think* i know but i'm not sure maybe you could tell meah! woooo... i'm weird!

This is good. Cool use of imagery. Good work. This is the best love related poem I've ever read. Thumbs up!

i'd like to review my own peom and say that i still feel most of these things, even though i did write this in 2001. i also feel alot of different things now about some people, you know who you are.