Reviews for Soaring In Song |
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Winter's Roar chapter 1 . 10/4/2003 Ending was fantastic, spectacular in fact! Brilliant idea, especially the last part, reaching out to the stars, moon, and yet never leaving the ground. Oh, wonderfully written. The only thing i would question is in your second paragraph you're talking about the gentle breeze and whispers, and then you use the word richchets. It's just a much harsher word than you use anywhere else in that part, and two lines after you use it you talk about it serenadind the creatures, singing a lullaby. Other than that little detail fantabulous job with this poem! ~ winter |
blah-d-blah chapter 1 . 1/22/2003 Intriquing. is that how you spell it? Very colorful. |
Mina Carlisle chapter 1 . 5/28/2002 This is good and I would like to say thanks for reviewing a poem (or poems I don't know if it is plural or not) of mine. I am working on some new stuff right now so maybe you'll read that too. But trust me this is good. |
Zemmiphobic chapter 1 . 5/20/2002 good lord this is good- there is something in night that makes it so beautiful- i love this poem- so wonderfully discriptive(spelling?)- i like the metaphors- took me a while to understand them- but i've never understood them, so don't feel bad lol. me loves it! great job! nice to see a new poem from you love always |