Reviews for Eadoin
laila chapter 13 . 10/5/2002
whew... so many emotions running high, a lot happened...feels like ur trying to wrap everything before the real climax occurs...

i can feel the violence pending...ayai...don't make it too gruesome though ;;...
Achoo-soy chapter 13 . 9/30/2002
I must say that this is the most captivating story

yet. I like the story and the mysterious plot...

Its really freaky and I really feel for Eadoin - that it really makes you want to know why is he in all this mess, and why angels and demons are attracted to him - like a magnet.

What really got me was:

1. Angel and demon, both falling in love at the same time with a motal human... ( i think - i know who it is...)

2. Marcell holding a "baby" - and its connections to kit...

3. Idande's connection to Eadoin's family...

4. And the Freaky Desdemona - what and why she really wants Eadoin...

Well, these are my observations and this is like watching "Pretender" or "Alias".

The Plot thickens...

I'm just dying to find out what happens next, and to show my thanks to reading this story - I feel that I want to sent some fanart, of the characters of this story...
AikoShrek chapter 13 . 9/29/2002
Eadoin's confession of love wasn't abrupt at all. At least, I didn't think so. I worked very well. I loved the chapter! I love how the kisses he gets aren't really kisses, and simply light brushes. They're so adorable. Poor Kit! A fallen angel in love with Marcell, a demon dude. Oh, this is in for some tragic endings. I don't know if I can handle it! I CANT WAIT FOR MORE. PLEASE POST!
b chapter 13 . 9/29/2002
it's about bloody time he realizes!

i've been listening to lots of versions of utada hikaru's 'hikari' as i've been reading this with people breathing down my back... but still, this is sw33! if i had more time i'd've reviewed every time but i was getting hungry with each chapter! hope you continue and s00n... unlike me ::sweatdrop::


b chapter 1 . 9/29/2002
wowowow~ i'm reading and ignoring whatever homework i need to do (out of sight, out of mind... :P)

first chapter. hooked? yes, hooked. sukii~

Cinaed chapter 13 . 9/29/2002
*claps* _ A great chapter! Yay for Elisabet being okay! *wipes brow* I hope Idande's okay... _ Ooh, a meeting of souls... That sounds so nifty! And I don't think Eadoin fell in love that quickly... I mean, there were hints of Eadoin falling for Idande from the beginning. I was hoping they'd end up together. *glances suspiciously at the comment about violence in the Author's Note* And I hope they can survive and keep loving each other... Another marvelous chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Keep writing!

r.mai chapter 13 . 9/29/2002
phew... everything's all right... for now... and gah.. the calm before the storm.. oh dear... couldn't it have been the storm before the calm? bleh, anywho, keep on writing. _ cya next chapter. ja~!
discontinued-me chapter 13 . 9/29/2002
-poke poke-

BOB: stop poking the chapter

-nod nod- yep, it's a good one. -nod nod- yep

BOB: -_-()
Maximum Poofy chapter 12 . 9/29/2002
It WAS a creepy ending. If I was Eadoin I'd die from fear or something. And I don't know if It's possible but I think I hate that demon child even MORE. how could she do that to elisa? evil tyke . . .anyhoo the last two chapter were awesome. I can't wait to red the next one.
Maximum Poofy chapter 11 . 9/29/2002
I reaaallly hate Desdemona. She's a freaky little freak thing. Though it's cool how it all turned out, that little part at the end got me a little emotional, it was sweet(despite the blood) anyhoo, I really think MArcell and Kit should end up together, they're a cute little couple.
Cinaed chapter 12 . 9/22/2002
_ Another brilliant chapter, as always. Dang, I wanna know about the baby! *whimpers* And I get the feeling that Zayn is after Eadoin, but maybe that's just me... *pets Elisabet* Poor baby... I liked her. So she's insane? Desdomana (ack, I cannot spell) twisted her mind? *looks horrified* No! Don't let her go after the grandmother! The grandmother is awesome! *looks thoughtfully* I want to know about the baby... *pouts* Yes, a very creepy chapter... But good, of course. Congratulations on passing the 50th mark, and please continue with the story. Well, have a marvelous day!

crazNM chapter 12 . 9/22/2002
Sorry I haven't reviewed for so long! My Internet Explorer is a little screwed up, and won't let me review. Actually, anything that creates a pop-up window doesn't work. Well, with the exception of my emails, that's rather weird, come to think of it.

Anyway, enough about me, I LOVE THIS! And Elisabet is seriously scaring me... *shudder* How is it that she can see what Eadoin sees? Or wait... does she have Angel blood, too? Wow, this is all too cool (oh, listen to my English... more like preppy talk). Can't wait until your next chapter!
AikoShrek chapter 12 . 9/22/2002
Hey, I love this story. Keep up the posting please. :P So much emotion. ;_;
shadow kei de lazy butt chapter 12 . 9/22/2002
whoa weird chapter, so Elisabet is insane now? hmm... interesting... well i liked it, write more when ya can.

~!shadow kei!~
Ewacat chapter 12 . 9/22/2002
*Falls over*

Freaky kids rule. *Shivers*

This is rather cinematic really. It'd make a great tv series. *Switches brain on*

Yes, it's really rather good... _~;;;
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