Argh... *dies*

Marcell very very very cool. Oh how very. Yuh. Poor Eadoin though. Getting hit by a car, being told about Kit Marcell, getting a vision full of... weirdness. Oh hell, this is an excellent story my friend! :D Getting better and better and all... :D

Sorry, I just woke up and... stuff. I have cotton wool for brains. Yuh. XD

But I still adore this. Lots. :D

whoa...intense chapter... i liked it tho... or rather... i like your writing style... the description of the vision was vivid... anywho, keep writing. ja~!

Well, now I know and I'm glad I know. Good chapter and I hope Marcell has a change of heart cause I like him, hell I like all of them! I hope you manage another Chapter soon cause I'm eager to find out what else is going to happen.

I'm glad it's making a little more sense now. very interesting still. I wonder what Idande did that for . .

YAAAAAAAAAAY! phew, u dun know how worried i was about kit being a baddie... it was irritating cuz the anxiety was always there... and that was sweeet... marcell and kit... i'm glad that kit didn't go hurt himself... so where's the plot going to go now? hm...anywho ... just keep on writing... i'll being seeing you next chapter... _

'tis a verily nice story. I'd comment further but I can barely keep my eyes open and can't find any coffee.

ooo coooooool! write more soon! only thing I can say is, very very very cool! the whole siteation is all cool and stuff. I lurv the angel-demon stuff. write more soon

~!shadow kei!~

oro... o.o i got a headache... so much info... and again, don't make kit a baddie! ;;; i like kit very, very much. hope you update soon! - and yayz fo the new chapter!

Ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh and a half!

Bit of a cliffhanger. EGADS I should not read your stories before I go to bed. Remind me of that next time. XD Now... ehh, I worship your writing skills, y'know. Teach me! TEACH ME! *falls over*

Sorry. I'm uber-tired from travelling for about eight hours straight due to evil plane flights and evil baggage and evil trains. British transport sucks. Grr. I make no sense. XD

Well. You rock. I LOVE this story. :D

*Signed: one random Marcell fan who needs to go to bed, uhh, NOW!*

Plus I just want to say that I like Kit more and more. Your characters are so rounded they're 4D. Not 2D. Like others's. Check out my rapidly deteriorating grammarrrr. Meep. Anyway. I

DON'T MAKE KIT A BAD GUY! i dun really care if he has a relationship with Marcell as long as he does what is 'right' Though I wonder how he'll react when he finds out that Eadoin is hurt... Marcell said he stopped looking for someone a long time ago or something.. That's what got me started on agreeing to this possible, note possible, relationship. heeeey, maybe marcell can be a good guy later on in the story... dunno... I juss want everyone to be happy... O_o Welps, ja~! luved the chappie, mostly because kit hasn't 'converted' yet. o.o

Wow, wouldn't have guessed Kit was EVIL, but you know keeps me interested, what is this you say about going away? Wednesday right? Waaah! Please updated soon.

I can't believe you're leaving for 2 whole weeks! *cries* Please update as soon as you get back! I love this story so far. I love the little twist with Marcell and Kit. hehe...

I'm likin' this a LOT! I really don't have words to express it or anything, it's just really good and very interesting. It just keeps getting better and better. greatabulous!

I KNEW IT! OH MY! *Grins* Oh wow, this chapter was FANTASTIC! *Falls over*

Meep! The whole transformation bit was really good! *Sighs* You're very, very good at that. I re-read that part twice, actually. I don't do that often cos I'm lazy. *Grins* Utterly brilliant. _

Plus OH MY GOD. Idande is *coughs* delicious. Yum. XD

I don't pre-plot much either, and I get told by teachers that it's a healthy thing for the story. But ehh. I like my stories grown organically! XD

Oh, I love Kit, but he would be a brilliant baddie. Not brilliant as in good-at-being-bad, but... it's one of those twists that really gets you.

Ahh, I love this story. Have fun in Cyprus! :D

AHHHHHH! ::screams in horror:: nooooo... i liked kit... mou... so he's a bad guy ... he'll still be friends with eadoin right? it'd be sad if they weren't friends anymore...