geh, now what happens? update soon! poor eadoin. o.o eesh...burnt...ouchies...pain...not good. ::babbles for a couple more moments:: oh yah, also read black phoenix. cool story. i like rian and guy. syrian is a bit too unstable for me to like. or should i say stupid and weak? o.o anywho, you're a really lovely writer. best wishes. cya next chappie!

WAII! That was good!

This is the first fic I've read in the Original Anime section and I have to say I'm very impressed!

Keep it up and continue soon!

Ice-Chan _

Aww... *Melts*

I love the way you write this. I'm obsessed with all things angel/demonic (gah, in Londinium, I am officially worried about who's the demon and who's the angel - *ahem* - not a spoiler _~;;;). I love this especially. You describe your characters so beautifully I'm turning green with envy. ;) Darn, Idande and Marcell just /flow/. It's fantastic. Teach me! Teach me! _~;;;

Plus I'm suspicious about Kit (*re-read fic at random interval today*). Not sure why. *Assumes suspicious face* _

Yah. *Sidles away* _~

no more? hopefully there will be more soon. really nice writing.

interesting. - i'm a bit confused but nevertheless it was quite a good read

great story so far keep it up.

Goshdarn.

I'm reading this and thinking 'goshdarn-London-goshdarn-GREAT!'. It would fit right in there. I was imagining Marcell sitting on the edge of the fountain in Trafalgar Square... hmm... Dunno why, but I adore this story to pieces. A lot to pieces. It's fantastic!

What is it with you and your stories? Darn. Addiction. Maybe it's your characters. Scary thing is, I know someone precisely like Marcell, and he was at a party I was at last ngiht. he was wearing those fake plastic angel wings you can get fro party shops. He's also - ahem - bloody gorgeous.

Excuse this crappy review. I'm still half-drunk. XD I promise I'll do better later... but I'm crushed. Hmm. You rule. :D

This story is so freckin' cool man so keep writing

Oooooooh my word...

This is nice and dark-tinged! _;;;

I really, really want to know where this si going! I wrote a story a few months ago - post-apocalyptic-style - in which there's this girl who can see spirits too... I never actually finished that... I might continue it this summer.

Anyway.

That's a wonderful, pretty story so far, except for all the blood bits. I think it's definitely got promise! More! *Bangs table with fist* MORE!

_;;;

Hee, well it sounds great to me! And no, I did find you rude, I was just surprised that you actually responded to my question! _

Your extra parts confuse me a bit though, but I guess I'll find out about that later on?

I didn't think you rewriting chapter 2 could make it better but I was wrong.

This is a excellent perfect chapter! ::Holds a gun up to the Author head:: And if you quit on this Story I won't hestitate to e-mail you pestering you to start on it again (I'm joking I won't pester you but I will e-mail a Begging e-mail)

This is interesting, can't wait for the next chapter

maybe we'll get to see the 'others' .

Wow, thanks for informing me... lol!

Anyway, I like this chapter! An angel, maybe, but can't remember a thing. If he's a boy, then about what age is Idande? Since Eadoin is in university/college... I can't remember, *smacks head*. Right... but yeah, this is cool! I wanna see what's gonna happen next, and all these "others" and stuff that we don't know! _

::Dances around in Joy:: Yay you update, I keep coming back hoping for a update, and you finally updated!

::blinks:: Well... It wasn't all that bad really, I've seen worse (And probably done worse) But I really like it, this whole fic is just so cool!

I really really like it!

But then... Fire Soul was cool too! (Reminds me, did I review for that?)

But anyway, I have a question for ya... did you use to have a fic on here (as in the site) called "Black Soul" or something similar? Sort of a sequel to "Fire Soul"? I'm quite sure I saw it, but now that it's not here, I'm starting to think that I hallucinated all that... haha! _

But really, DO CONTINUE!