Reviews for Eadoin
kuroi kenshi chapter 23 . 3/26/2004
... ow... my throat is aching really bad from holding back tears! lol!
This was INCREDIBLE! You should really get this published... it's so beautiful and everything is written so well... wow
This is officially one of the best stories on this site (nods determinedly) You rock! o
kuroi kenshi chapter 15 . 3/26/2004
This reminds me of X/19 and Angel Sanctuary... only this story is about a million times better than either of those! o
I wish I could write like you~! T-T Anyway... I'm going to try and finish reading this today _ so I'll leave another review at the end.
kuroi kenshi chapter 2 . 3/25/2004
Oh... my... goodness...
Your writing is breath taking! It's all so gorgeous... wow... I'm not even a fraction through the story, still being on chapter two, but... gah! It's so wonderful! Okee, time for me to read the rest _
orlha chapter 23 . 3/20/2004
it's beautiful.. it's heavenly( no pun intended.. lol) I can't believe i finally finished it.. it tormented me when i wasn't reading this.. seriously.. i think u shld consider publishing this.. if u do.. do drop me an email.. i'll be first in line to buy it n re-read it
orlha chapter 9 . 3/20/2004
omg.. please don't take this story off yet.. I must bread finish this.. it's too addictive.. okok? promise me okok? when i finish this i'll msg on the last chp.. PLease please PLEASE don't take it off any time soon.. not before i finish.. or i'll be tormented forever...
Fureiya chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
O.o NICE! I love it! WHOOT! I thought it would've been a girl at first and Eadoin would've fallen in love and etc. The common stuff ya know? But it didn't it was a guy and Eadoin is like "wow" LOL well anyways I'll be reading - and YES! YOU FINISHED THIS STORY TOO! T_T I don't have to suffer anymore but I could READ ON AND ON AND ON! UNTIL I FINISH! WHOOT! - Nice chappie if I didn't say so earlier -;. Latez!
P.S. If you don't mind, I would appreciate it if you read my stories as well -; later!
Nobody85 chapter 23 . 3/6/2004
Dear gods! I cried so hard reading this! It was all so beautiful and so emotional! And Idande came back! _
I sat here at my computer for over 10 hours reading this... That's how good you are! _
Ahh... I would type a really long review, but I can sum it up in three words: This was great!
I hope you know you are my absolute favorite on-line author and my second favorite author overall. _
Great job on everything you do!
Wingdance chapter 23 . 2/13/2004
I really liked the first chapter. _;; I haven't read anything else, yet... you see, my pretty Yuki-chan with silver eyes and blue hair (she's a Dell laptop), her power cord is broken, and until I can get a new one, I can't really use her. Unfortunately, I'm going on an eight-hour drive this weekend.
So here I am, sitting in school, when I figure, hey, I'll check on Mikaili. (I put it on my favorite stories list on a whim when it was put up and I randomly found it. And in the reviews, someone said there were familiar characters. So I go back to the main page, and lo and behold, long stories! Since my school has no limit on print-outs in the comp lab... I printed out all of Eadoin for the trip! *cackles evilly* Foolish high school admin... I shall wreak havoc on your pitiful paper and ink stock!
*ahem* *blushes* Anyhoo, I'll read the rest later, but for now, it's really good!
Aozora chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Sugoi. n_n Go write your own book. It'll be a bestseller.
How on earth do you write so well... envies xD
Spirirt chapter 23 . 1/18/2004
I'm crying. I literally have tears streaming down my face. I haven't cried for a fic in ages and now you have me here in the middle of a deserted computer lab on a cold winter evening crying.
Thank you so much for sharing this with me and the other readers. It's beautiful and I wish I'd read it a long time ago.
:) You are an amazing writer.
Alyn Drasil chapter 23 . 1/18/2004
This is such a beautiful story and I LOVE it. I keep coming back and re-reading random chapters and then I realized I should review it. :) Marvelous, beautiful, and wonderful story! I can't say what I like best because I liked ALL of it! I must go check out the rest of your stuff now...
Catch Ya Later Alligator chapter 23 . 11/5/2003
Oh my God. This was one of the most beautiful things I've read in a long time. I read it all in one sitting because I couldn't pull myself away. The characters and the emotion and the feeling. . .it's so wonderful. There were many times that I almost cried. There were actual tears. Just. . .wow. I'm so impressed with you right now. I could go on and on, but I'd just be repeating myself.

Beautiful. Definately, DEFINATELY one of my favorites, now.
Seirvitas chapter 23 . 11/3/2003
OO, its over. I feel so, bummed. I really loved the story. The whole time I was reading fallen I thought, I still have eadoin when I finish this. The problem is I don't have eadoin now. I read them both and I'm bound to have withdrawl from being separated from my angelic and demonic lovelies. Yahto, yahto, he needs someone. You can't leave him alone now, not now that he's finally beginning to understand. The concept of light and dark being drawn together in your story reminds me somewhat of the dark crystal. The two belong together and push together magnetically. Demons aren't evil per say, just of the dark. Angels arent good per say, only creatures of the light. There can be salvtion for a demon through love. And yet I ask myself, when a demon turned mortal dies do they fall to the pits of hell even if their heart has been made beautiful through love? Does an angel return to the angelic part of heaven or do they go where the humans go? Sorry too many questions. Write a part three please! I'm sure a lot of people would love you for it! *waits around anxiously for the next chapter of guided by*
Seirvitas chapter 19 . 11/2/2003
I'm supposed to be asleep, again ; I'm not. I am gonna finish this tomorrow, eer today. goodnight sweetie! I really should post my dreams on fictionpress. Blah sleep before death. Goodnight
Seirvitas chapter 18 . 11/2/2003
this is where I left off tonight. You starve me edana because I read instead of eating and I read some of cheeseburger of doom's stories too and its addictive. You both have something in common, a strong, VERY and nearly impossibly strong view of love that makes your stories emotional and powerful. Even a twisted or corrupt love is beautiful and a pure love is unimaginable, and yet you show it and portray it in its purest and untainted form, all excepting and forgiving, true compassion. When I witnessed the terrible act on Idande I knew it would happen, but as I lived through eadoin's emotions and felt his pain as that horrible event occurred, I nearly died inside with him and I fought with all my heart not to hate Zayn because I love him so very much.

I couldn't.

I actually hated Zayn even though I know what he becomes. Edana how do you do it? Its simply amazing. Sorry for the long babble hun its only because I worship and adore you with all my heart.
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