Awh! Idande is so innocent! Heh, falling asleep on the bed... and Eadoin slept next to him. o.o;; That's a little fast...

Poor Eadoin! ;-; Why's he having all these evil visions? Gah! I need to know why!

O, an angel. *o* And he's kawaii! Awesome! No shirt? *drool*

Nice start, I'm going to go read more.

Oh, neat-o! I've only read the first chappy, but this is the best fiction I've read, by far. I'll read the next chappys when I get a chance.

I love this story very much! I could not stop reading till the end.

It's beautiful! I'm only on chapter three so far, but I love the story!

This was so beautiful. The only thing I was unhappy with was Zayn. I wish his ending was happier, he was my favorite character(I always go for the misguided ones). Other than that, this was really good.

oh my gosh! *sobs* this story was amazing. you should really think about polishing it up a bit and publishing it! _ I had tears in my eyes during chapter 22 when Idande said he had to leave! *sobs* But you brought him back! :D This was wonderful work. *sniffles*

*sniffle* its so sad! but it is very good... i dont like reviewing until the very end but I couldnt help it. tip: dont listen to "Imoortal" by Eavanescence when you read this chapter, lol

Holy God that was beautiful! I loved it, everything about it! I'm inspired! I have to write! I'm going to write something! I wanna draw and write and do all this stuff and it's all because you can write like all hell! *cheering like a phrat boy* YEAH! WHOO-HOO! HAPPY ENDING! *cheering*

Whew! That was good! I spent two weeks printing this story up, taking to to school with me and passing it around, as so far, there has been nothing but good comments on it. God, I wish I could write like you. You might never get this review, but all the same, your work, your story, you vision is absolutely outstanding. You should get an award for this, and by god I don't care if I have to make you one! _

That was so indescribably good. I loved Idande and Eadoin from the start (such a cute couple) and you make your villans so hateable! I loved Desdemona and I cried through half of this while screaming "AW THAT'S CUTE!" at the top of my lungs and getting stared at! God, I can't emphasize enough how good this was! AH!

Okay, I'll stop, but I will be sharing your work with everyone I can, and I am definitely referring people that read my stuff to you. I now have an idol! *beams* Outstanding! I can't rant enough! YAY! GOOD STORY!

~Xandra

Xandra: All right, I'm reviewing for two people here. I started reading Fallen just last week and I was immediately addicted, but I realized that their had to be a story before it in order for most of it to make sense. Then, I checked your list and found this. I shared it with my friend, Crystal Rose, because she's really into this sort of thing (and she loves hot guys and you guys are ALL babes) and now she's raving about it in class. I can't stand her anymore, so I'm reviewing. So far, I'm only to chapter 13 and I'm rivited (God, I was scared when Desdemona dropped Kit) and Crystal is to 8 and she is so far in love with Marcell.

CrystalRose: OHMYGODILOVEYOURSTUFFIT'SFABULOUSANDICAN'TGETENOUGH!AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!

Xandra: -_-0 Yes, she is nuts. We have to go back to class now, but you'll get several more of these reviews, so be ready. By the way, how on earth do you pronounce Eadoin and Idande? I've been saying it ay-DO-een and ee-DAHN-day.

CrystalRose: I'm speechless because your story is so beautiful and exotic and evil in its own way. Totally original.

Xandra: Speechless? (I wish!) Okay, later, and please, hurry and update Fallen!

Yay! They got back together! *does happy dance of joy* This story was positively magnificent. And the ending was great! I'm a sucker for happy endings. I think there's only one thing I might possibly critique, and that's that they all seem to cry an awful lot. Not that it's not to be expected, considering what they were going through. It just seemed to dampen some of the times when a good cry would have been really heartwrenching. But that's all. I absolutely love this story...I think I put it on my favorites list some time back. Will have to check, and if it's not, then I will, because it deserves it!

Um...*is shy* I feel really pitiful doing this, but I was wondering if maybe you would take a look at one of my stories? It's called Changelings, and I'd really love your opinion on can get to it by clicking on my name. You don't have to read it if you don't have the time or inclination though; my reviews are given freely, not because I want something back. But anyways, once more, beautiful story. Hopefully I will get a chance to read the sequel I saw floating around sometime soon. Well, see ya!

Kae

Hi, me again! Yeah, so it's taking me a while to get through this story *mutters* Damn real life that only allows me to read about a chapter a day. But anyways, again, this was a wonderful chapter, full of surprise, heartache, and...and..I can't think of another word because my mind is broken, it seems, but I loved it! You're right, that could have been a very nice ending, but an epilogue will wrap it up nicely. Poor Idande and Eadoin! They had to leave each other! *sobs* And the whole thing about giving the power to Idande...is that what they meant when they had to take the power back to heaven or hell? In that case, I guess Heaven won, which is a very good thing. Ooh, and cute violet haired baby! Okay, am going to try and get through the epilogue today too. *crosses fingers and hopes* Bye!

Kae

Well, first my heart nearly stopped, then it started jumping for joy, and now it's stuck somewhere in the vicinity of my throat. You're about to give me a heart attack, chica! I'm just glad that I've only now had the time to read this, instead of reading it as the chapters came out, because I don't think I could have stood waiting for the next chapter to come. Waaii! Sorry this is short, but I have to see what happens! Bye!

Kae

This chapter was so...poignant is the only word I can really come up with at the moment. First the scene with Zayne in the park, and Eadoin's discovery, then the last part with Idande...this chapter is the kind of thing that gets your heart aching, because you know what's bound to happen next. And Kit, poor Kit. This chapter seems so, well, hopeless in a way, but kind of also not, because of the last scene. But hopefully, this story will follow the darkest before dawn theory, because if it doesn't I do believe I might actually just cry at the end. Well, on to the next chapter!

Kae

*sobs* This was a wonderful chapter, truly. Lots of pretty angst to go around, and I can't tell you how relieved I was that you let Kit be revived. Was going to kick you if you hadn't! :D Anyways, love the whole pregnant idea. It kind of had me going "eh!" at first, but now I understand, and that's so cool! Babies are the best! K, am going to go now, will review next chapter soon!