Reviews for Eadoin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! It's Kaelyn, the girl who drew that picture of Marcell and Kit for you. It's been forever since I've reviewed (and truthfully since I've had the time to even read)but anyways... Oh! I loved the first scene in this chapter, with the trio of angels. I love that Kit knows the song. It was just a beautiful scene. And the ending scene...oh my god. Just...oh my god. And then crapped out, so I couldn't go to the next chapter and find out what happens. But now it seems to be working again, so I'm gonna review and then go read. I'll try and review the rest of the chapters. Well, see ya! Kae P.S. that picture I drew you...I don't think it's going to get colored. I just don't have the time, patience with the program, or space on my computer to do it. Maybe when I get a new hard drive...but don't hold your breath. I'm really sorry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, an epilogue! I cried after reading chapter 22 when Idande had to go back to heaven and again in chapter 23 when he came back! Yes, I'm a sap. But it was beautiful nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! that was cruel . . .but who am I to say so? I practically do the same thing in my stories! *grins* oh well. It was a very interesting chapter. At first I thought Zayn was going to rape Eadoin but the poor ickle Idande makes his grand entrance. I wanna cry now *sniffles* I'm glad you don't intend to kill everyone. I'd cry and attempt to revive them. I'm also glad all the mean evil things you do have a purpose. Laters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! good chapter. What's Zayn gonna do to him! I hope it's nothing bad. ( TOO bad,*snickers* I'm evil) I hope you won't kill everyone off, I'm already guessing whose gonna end up dead. and let me tell you ' I like not the looks of it' hehe, still, really good. It's constantly filled with some sort of action! this is why I keep reading your stories. I'm addicted! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I never expected that. It was sweet with all the love stuff between Eadoin and Idande, I think they deserve it. But with Eadoin being the ninteen yr. old soul and having the destruction of the world growning in him( damn that's a lot to take in) I don't think those too will ever get a chance at lurve. I feel sorry for them too. *pouts* poor them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful ending. i hope zayne gets a happy ending too. okies. see u in your new stories... bai! |
![]() ![]() ![]() okies... i'm sorry zayne! i didn't mean to be mean... wonder what happens now then... sad sad... |
![]() ![]() Beautiful, beautiful gave up everything to be with Eadoin..*sigh*..Wow...Just fabulous!... Can't describe...great work!.Hope you do other works (which I see you have been!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() o-wa-ri~ man, this is one of the first series i've ever read that actually ended _ and ended well... -b. |
![]() ![]() well, i don't know if you're still checking reviews anymore, but i just want to say truly a beautiful beautiful story. i thought the first ending was really sweet and sad, but it's even nicer to have them back together! i would love to see this published as a book! i would buy it! anyway, keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *falls over in a mixture of shock and delight* Okay, that was one of the coolest endings ever! Sorry I didn't review until now, I've been buried in homework and the like. Anyway... *claps happily* I'm so glad Eadoin and Idande get to spend the rest of their lives together... Just like Kit and Marcell! *grins* All in all, a happy ending... And hopefully Zayn will find someone that won't be another unrequited love... I liked him oh so much! I was about to cry when I found out that Idande had the Destruction within him and had to go back to Heaven. *offers hugs and candies* Thanks for not making that the ending! I would have been majorly depressed... Idande's return was oh-so-sweet, and I loved the way this story turned out. I want to congratulate you on the talent you display so well, and thank you for sharing that talent with us so we can enjoy characters like Kit, Zayn, Marcell, Leilani, Eadoin, and Indande... You're one of the best authors on FF.N and I cannot wait to read another one of your original stories, whenever you write one. Once again, thank you for sharing your gift, and keep writing! For your sake and mine! *grins* And all your other loyal reviewers. Well, my hat's off to you. I truly enjoyed Eadoin! ~Cinaed |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::holds breath:: DAMMIT ZAYNE! i can't believe him... and i was kinda hoping he'd be good... dammmmmmmn... good always triumphs over evil. HA HA HA HA HA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nooooooo... ::sighs:: a couple more chapters... and we'll see... edana's nice! she wouldn't be mean to everyone... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...less and less to say each time... can't wait for the kid to show up tho... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::cries:: kit...marcell... oh...my...god... this is why i dreaded reading on... |