Reviews for Eadoin
Tammaiya chapter 23 . 12/9/2002
Aw... That was perfect. Truly perfect. I don't think this story could have been wrapped up any better- it was a beautiful ending for a beautiful work of art. Zayn's part in the chapter was really well incorporated, and I liked it how there were elements tying it to various parts of the plot. The hospital, the park, Kit and Marcell's child. I thought the healing of Eadoin's hand was a nice touch, and most of all, I really loved the way you brought Idande back. It was a good explanation, and it was such a well done scene. Sweet but not sappy. I liked the inclusion of Eadoin's nan and Elisabet, too.

I appreciate your thanks, and I'm truly glad if I've managed to help or inspire you in any way.

Hopefully, I'll be able to be equally or even more helpful in any further pieces you write.

Oh, by the way- I'm at LEAST half Irish, my name is Irish, and I still thought it was pronounced "E-R-Doh-In" ; I'll probably always think of him that way...

noodlepower chapter 23 . 12/8/2002
I was crying as I read this last chapter. I'm so happy that it has a happy ending. I'm kind of sad it had to end though. I actually got attached to the characters! It was beautiful story. You did a magnificent job!
crazNM chapter 23 . 12/7/2002
That was GREAT! I love it! _ Just what I needed, to get away from my cramming for English... I have an oral on Monday! (.
Laughing Cat chapter 23 . 12/7/2002
And yet again you made me cry... This story turned out so beautiful, so poetic, I love it. Congratulations, and thank you so much for posting this on the web so that I could see it!

*giggles* You gave them twins!
QueenAmbi chapter 23 . 12/7/2002
WoW.. Another great chapter as usual... A slight twist there with Idande coming back as mortal... I also wonder what's going to happen to Zayn... well that's all for now! Bye and keep writing!
Guest chapter 23 . 12/7/2002
You are a very very very VERY good writer! One of those who can change and pace a story with twist and emotions. I loved this story very much, and wish there was a sequel. But this story, I think would be better if it ended here. Please keep on writing like this because you have such wonderful skills.
Tammaiya chapter 22 . 12/6/2002
Wai... If you haven't been updating, well, I'm guilty too. And it was worth the wait- it was up to your usual standard, being brilliant. I really thought this chapter worked well, with the two councils and etc. It really brought everything, and I especially liked the fact that you included his dead sister. It was linking the whole story together. Me being the silly sap I can, I can't live with a depressing end, so I'm hanging out for the epilogue!
noodlepower chapter 22 . 12/6/2002
No! You can't just end it there! I mean, how could you possibly separate Eadoin and Idande? I mean, if Eadoin can't have Idande, then he should at least get Zayn. Speaking of which, what happened to him? He saved a mortal life? He couldn't possibly go back to Hell after that, could he? Or is he dead... *scans story* Nope, last thing I read about Zayn is that Leilani was half-supporting. I know she didn't take a demon back to Heaven with her, did she? Is that even allowed? Nope, don't think so. And nobody ever healed Zayn's wound... so many questions unanswered questions.
Guest chapter 22 . 12/4/2002
NOOOOOOOOO! dun break them up! nooooooo! ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! *sniff* thats so sad...anyways...very good story! got me hooked for three days lol _ I loved the plot twists!
QueenAmbi chapter 22 . 12/3/2002
THAT WAS SO GOOD! sry I can't htink of anything else to say... :)
AikoShrek chapter 22 . 12/3/2002
Oh My God... that is NOT fair... I'm so depressed. But it makes sense...
Ahcoo-Soy chapter 22 . 12/2/2002
it was the best story - that kept you at the edge of you seat...

Reminds me Ayashi no ceres, and Fushigi Yuugi

Please, a epilogue or final chapter pleaseeee...

I just know that Eadoin and Idande won't be seperated forever...
Laughing Cat chapter 22 . 12/2/2002
Aw man... I'm crying like a baby again.

This story is just so awesomely powerful, so well written, so moving...

And you still managed to make a (somewhat) happy ending. I don't know how you do it, but thanks. It was such a joy to read.
laila chapter 22 . 12/1/2002
i haven't reviewed in intense...omg...that can't be the end right?.it's still got a tbc...*phew* wonderful portrayal and very poignant writing.i love your work!...
noodlepower chapter 11 . 12/1/2002
Okay, I just discovered this story um... today, yesterday... whatever. All I know is I've been reading this story like I was addicted to it. It's REALLY late where I live and I'm about to fall asleep at the keyboard, but I couldn't do that without letting you know one thing: I may have only gotten to chapter 11, but damnit, I love this. You are an excellent writer, far better than me.
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