i liked this! loved the formatting of the rhymes, and the overall flow of the poem.. keep up the good work!

Thank you for sending me the poem. i liked it alot. I thought it was very good. It has a lot of meaning in it.

I liked the rhyme scheme you had. YAY! Devils rule. Okay, I'm not that smart, but it was very very very very very very very very very very very very FANTASTIC! Ha, I'm laughing because you used words that I don't even understand. I should probably build my vocabulary. Yes, the Devil can be very mischievous. But wouldn't the Devil feed off of those who have done wrong, or would it just feed off the innocent for the fun of it? Keep on trekking Rali!