Reviews for Endings |
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Katherine Daystar chapter 1 . 1/24/2006 Whoah, powerful piece! This is short, but very intense. I was thinking "clique" as I read the clear foreshadowing of the accident, but that the breakup had been a prank was a twist I did not expect, and it cast a different light on the whole story. I feel like the very end could use...something, to give more closure or attach a meaning to the profoundness of what happened. Of maybe the point of the story is how meaninglessly her life was messed up. Anyway, I liked it! |
Nicole Alexander chapter 1 . 12/30/2005 omg thats so sad |
Rads chapter 1 . 6/7/2002 ...that was so sad! and it had morals and meanings and whoa was it beautifully written! |
Jackson1 chapter 1 . 5/20/2002 ...::stares blankly::...::blinks::...::stares again::...::sniff::...::whimper::...::opens mouth::...::chokes on sob::...::closes mouth::...::makes a small noise in back of throat::...::cries:: YOU SUCK SO BAD SARA! HOW COULD YOU WRITE THAT! ::cries:: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! ::cries::AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! HOW COULD YOU WRITE SUCH A SAD ENDING! ::cries:: You like killing all the happiness! Rim, Renos! ::Thinks while still crying:: Shauna...YOU BETTER NOT KILL VASE THAT'S ALL I GOTTA SAY! ::cires again:: I CAN'T STOP CRYING YOU LITTLE TURD!::cries on and on and on and on:: |
Rangel chapter 1 . 5/18/2002 That was so good, I cried at the end it was that sad. A dare! The poor girl, all because of a dare I deffinately was not expecting that. Good Good stuff, oh yeah this is Amber heh heh I decided I'd read some of your stuff because Your so wonderful |