so sad...

Which Rammstein song did this come from? The only one I can think of for this would be "Die Sonne," as the others don't seem to fit it so well...

Chibbi, I liked this piece of work, much better than your Slipknot one, yes I am a loyal Maggot, but that's besides the point, I said that was the worst fic I have written because I was having trouble following it, I do not belive that was well written in the least...If I could have followed it better I would have at least said it was well written, now I liked this original piece It was easier to follow...and don't think I am trying to get on your good side cause I am not...I write what I think, since my Psychotic fic was unliked by you could you write why? If I have some gramical crap wrong or maybie other s*** why don't you tell me...and don't say it was the topic, cause I know your views...This piece of literature that you wrote was good and I enjoyed reading this one...

the one and only

Otsego Undead.

oh yeah I am a woman and I do have a father so that means I am not a BASTARD, thank you for the review I enjoy a bit of mixing up :-)

Awesome story, powerful in its simplicity. And for the record, goth guys who wear make-up are awesome, too.

Chibbiiii, that was coooool! good writing, if a bit depressing. nice one! from sammy the yodelin cow girl

Rammstein isnt a song its a band.

really good story, its very emottional. I like it, it made me cry!

Thats a pretty darn good story you got there... you should have checked it through though, only a few mistakes i noticed...its your fault though, you've made me subject to noticing these things... Poor Bri... sounds like a nice person though, pity he was only fictional... Well, i'd better go. Have a nice day at home *grumble grumble*

Pretty good story! Seriously it was. I think you should maybe add a little. Like is the boy going to kill himself or find someone else? But still it was a good story!

That's pretty good. It's got a lot of emotion in it.