Reviews for My Own World I Shall Stand |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sup! ShinigamiForever's not liking this teen angst trend we're starting, but o well! :P Yet another great poem! I know how it feels to be like this, Mendelssohn. And I especially liked: "Alas, all immortals are drawn to mortals Leading mortals to control immortals And immortals, who cruel Fate plays upon, Loses their immortality. A mortal they become." Keep it up! Over & out, Wufei |
![]() ![]() Hi! It was a great poem. Straight to the point and revealing. The true meaning was not hid behind a cloak of fancy language. Instead, it is one of the only poems I've read that shows the delicate and utterly vulnerable inside. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I love this! So angsty, it's great! It reminds me of some people I know...keep writing, please! ~Ardnaxela~ P.S. Gosh, more people should readthe original poetry, it's often very good! |