|Reviews for My Own World I Shall Stand|
| Wufei chapter 1 . 6/5/2002
Sup! ShinigamiForever's not liking this teen angst trend we're starting, but o well! :P Yet another great poem! I know how it feels to be like this, Mendelssohn. And I especially liked:
"Alas, all immortals are drawn to mortals
Leading mortals to control immortals
And immortals, who cruel Fate plays upon,
Loses their immortality.
A mortal they become."
Keep it up!
Over & out,
| enemy-of-computers chapter 1 . 6/3/2002
Hi! It was a great poem. Straight to the point and revealing. The true meaning was not hid behind a cloak of fancy language. Instead, it is one of the only poems I've read that shows the delicate and utterly vulnerable inside.
| Sugar On The Asphalt chapter 1 . 5/12/2002
Wow. I love this! So angsty, it's great! It reminds me of some people I know...keep writing, please!
P.S. Gosh, more people should readthe original poetry, it's often very good!