Reviews for Go Girl |
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CraigAPrice chapter 1 . 9/19/2004 this is good |
AngelaiR chapter 1 . 12/22/2003 go girl, yes, very good, well written and eye catching:D toodles ~ Merry Christmas ~ Plz r/r |
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 8/31/2003 good poem, good idea, good writin! |
Anumati chapter 1 . 6/5/2003 Better. The flow works better in this poem. There were two lines, "Hurry up before they come for you again" and "Make sure that saline is gone" where it gets congested in too many syllables / non-conductive sounds. Careful. The repeating "Go girl" motif helps give the whole thing momentum. It's quite good for an "angsty" poem. |
Seint chapter 1 . 12/1/2002 very good I really enjoyed reading this one, I must say that your stuff is some of the best I've read on this site (seriously I mean it) I should hope to see more of your writing in the future |
Kari9 chapter 1 . 5/12/2002 Hee... GO GIRL! It's great! I like much! Heh... I *was* right, Dad already spotted it. What a smart little girl I am... _ j/k. Awesome! See ya laters! Kar (lol) _ |
logan chapter 1 . 5/12/2002 its deep, its sad... it's deeply sad. it's really good stephanie, though i think i need chocolate now to counter the depression |