Reviews for Go Girl |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is good |
![]() ![]() ![]() go girl, yes, very good, well written and eye catching:D toodles ~ Merry Christmas ~ Plz r/r |
![]() ![]() ![]() good poem, good idea, good writin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Better. The flow works better in this poem. There were two lines, "Hurry up before they come for you again" and "Make sure that saline is gone" where it gets congested in too many syllables / non-conductive sounds. Careful. The repeating "Go girl" motif helps give the whole thing momentum. It's quite good for an "angsty" poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good I really enjoyed reading this one, I must say that your stuff is some of the best I've read on this site (seriously I mean it) I should hope to see more of your writing in the future |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hee... GO GIRL! It's great! I like much! Heh... I *was* right, Dad already spotted it. What a smart little girl I am... _ j/k. Awesome! See ya laters! Kar (lol) _ |
![]() ![]() its deep, its sad... it's deeply sad. it's really good stephanie, though i think i need chocolate now to counter the depression |