Reviews for Swallow
mike chapter 1 . 9/23/2002
Damn it all, another thanatophine! For the love of God, Rob, run!
Will chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
That's funny.

Reminds me of that joke about a guy trying to hang himself witht the rope around his stomack. A friend criticizes him, "you're supposed to tie it around your neck". The guy replies, "tried already - can't breath that way".

I understand the story isn't about it - just laying out the thoughts it arouses in me.

Don't tell me anyone actually takes the story seriously. It's so funny, so stereotypically naive. Made to impress... to call a pity upon the "suffering" author. Is that it? Don't tell me - it's like that Robin Williams' painting from Good Will Hunting.
The Caped Cadaver chapter 1 . 5/14/2002
I like it a lot. I really do. It's very good. . .

-Sk├Âll, The Caped Cadaver
allie cole chapter 1 . 5/12/2002
creepy... very creepy.