OH! Continue soon! Please!

heh heh heh. u know hu i am, so dun bug me for a review anymore. P

good work, plot is terribly addictive...

dun u dare give it an anticlimatic ending! O

but then again, remember not to feel pressured...wahaha

on a last note,careful of some of the grammar...

that's all, ma'am!

This is good. But I have one sugestion. Could you make new paragraphs for the talking? It's hard to read it in this format. Thanks. Keep up the good work! Post soon!

COOL! Pleasse write more it's very good!

Great story. you should continue it.

thanks for reading my stuff. about "the box": I'm 16(soon 17) years old. don't know what grade that would be where tour from, but in sweden that is the first grade of gymansium. glad you liked it.

i'm thinking about writing a longer story, like a continuation of the box, when the main character is about 17-18 years old and decides to search for the treasure again. this time he finds something. not a terasure, but a whole new world. I'll see what i'll do. now about your writing: you write really good. pity you have so few things posted, though. i'll be waiting for that next chapter you promised. again, thank you for reading my stuff.