*giggles manically* I like her! Very good. "broach" should be brooch- one is to open a container, the other is a pin. *continues to giggle manically*

he he all men are woosses (is that how you spell it?) anyway great work, keep going and I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

That was very odd, but in a good way. It was a bit confusing at parts, though. I love the twist on the rescue-the-hidden-princess story and how it was told through the diary entries.

I review! It good, reminded me of some of the books you let me borrow though. Don't you love it when what you read influences your writing? But it still good. i is haved grammar well.

Hee hee hee! I liked it. It's got a quaint sort of humor combination and wonderful realistic wit that I like. Keep going!