Reviews for To My Alexander
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
I love how you picture him, running toward, and then running away from the sun (amun-ra) as though his destiny; like the sun, was so bright that he had to escape his own heat. I can see Alexander brittle from the sun sending one last kiss to Hephistian before dying. Lovely piece.

Lady of Discord chapter 1 . 5/31/2005
Wow. Your word choice rock. You make Alexander Great lovers like me seem inferior.
Kage Chikara chapter 1 . 9/10/2002
:wide eyes: That was a bit beyond even me, I must say. But you have a way with poetry... feh, you're not living in the right time! After all, that's the kind of confusing, yet still moving poetry, that leaves the reader feeling a bit lost, that we study in my literature class!
RackeltheRacoon chapter 1 . 5/22/2002
Wow, that was beautiful, and very historically acurate. I have developed something of a fascination for Alexander and his era, and this certainly did him justice. Well done :)
ShinigamiForever chapter 1 . 5/15/2002
A wonderful tribute to all rulers who suffer from the paranoia in abosultism. Ingenius and lovely. You just keep getting better.
Lowell Boston chapter 1 . 5/14/2002
Excellent! Well versed and constructed. Was this historical as well?

More, continuous shelves of

The Land, fordable rivers blocking

Aligned motions, fresh glinting troops, how each and every

Nemesis is as lovely as the one before it,

Fiery black

Arabian Stallions…

Great verse!