Reviews for GONE
DarkAngel202884 chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
This is a very sweet poem! _
Raining Star chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
totally sweet
ionlyliveindreams chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
Aw... this is so great! I can almost feel how you're feeling... Maybe it's because I know what it's like to miss people alot. Lots of my friends used to live in other countries and they go to visit for so long! But they always end up coming back so that's good! :) Great job with the poem.

Keep writing

~ionlyliveindreams
Sarah6 chapter 1 . 7/29/2002
Na ... gut ... Ich ... versuche ... irgendein ... Wort ... hervor ... zu ... bringen ... Das ... ist ... - Tut mir leid. - Mein Herz rast noch immer so, dass ich glaube es wird gleich explodieren. -Ich habe noch nie so gut Gedichte gelesen.
Elchi chapter 1 . 5/31/2002
ok, now, i wrote a poem too, to show my very dear friend höllenwauwau how deeply touched i was. i want to thank you. this was the first time a poem was dedicated to me. but my english is not half as good as yours is and i'm not a good poet, so please have mercy.

GONE

Now you are gone

Even if it's not for long

I feel the pain

I miss you

Though I know

You feel the same

I think of you whatever I do

I miss you

My heart feels empty,

When you're gone

My days are lonely,

Since you're gone

My life is senseless,

When you're not near

But soon you'll come

And end my pain

You'll be here with me

You'll be near to me

I'm looking forward to this day

in absolutely joy
Elchi chapter 1 . 5/25/2002
ooohhho ich bin ja sooo gerührt! *schnief* mir fehlen die worte!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 5/18/2002
aaaaawwwwww, very sweet