Reviews for Wanting Something More
EmmyB chapter 60 . 12/23/2009
Oh! I have an evil idea for you *chuckle*.

He goes to college and Audreys there and she drugs him at a party that he goes to ignoring Lydias phone call or sumthn and know 'does the deed' with him and he has to explain it to Lydia and she does sumthn to the ring...and you get the idea :)
EmmyB chapter 60 . 12/23/2009
I think whatever you write will be amazing! Geez, wonder how many of those you got. But i think from Jordans POV would be a little repetitive, and they were always so good at speaking their mind there isnt too much to tell. Previously was pretty well summed up so i dont see alot of point in that.I'd like to hear what happens next but in a nut-shell, not alot of him gone and her crying and 'evil stuff'. But whatever you choose it'll keep me interested!
Emmyb chapter 37 . 12/23/2009
The chapters are great, and relevent. And if you would like to make alot of people happy, do the sequil(sorry i know i spelt it wrong by my back space isnt functioninga the molment.)
Emmyb chapter 6 . 12/23/2009
I love this story! Its really well written and interesting. I wish guys were that perfect!
withflyingcolors chapter 58 . 8/15/2009
I was going to put off my million reviews until tomorrow, but after this I couldn't not review. Jordans note was the sweetest thing ever. I want to take him home with me and smother him in hugs and kisses. Thanks for this marvolous story that has me reading at 11:30 at night, which isn't bad compared to most nights.


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Skitters chapter 3 . 3/30/2007
i love this story very much so far
kiralila chapter 60 . 3/26/2007
great story. it's one of the best ones that i've ever read and trust me i read A LOT!

can't wait to read all ur other stories.

u are a great writer. god gave you a talent and you are using it very well. i applaud u.
anonumous chapter 29 . 3/24/2007
do u really think that she's fat?

cause well i am like 127 and i'm only about 5'3...

i guess i need to lose like at least 15 pounds? ;)
kiralila chapter 23 . 3/24/2007
i loved that french part!

i think it's because i've been to france.

some one told me that french is the language of love...

i don't know to believe it or not though...

great story. love it. can't wait to finish it.
siddika chapter 59 . 1/27/2007
AJS chapter 60 . 10/23/2006
Umm okay. I'm going to reply since I read all 60 chapters of your story but I don't know exactly what to write :x Since you haven't updated any of the sequel or Jordan's POV of ths story (the latter which I REALLY was interested in reading), I think I'm just going to stop after this one :x But anyways, yeah. The fluff between Jordan & Lydia in this story is unbelievably cute :D And I've got to tell you as well that I fell hard for Beau too :D There's actually this guy at my school who I think fits the EXACT description that you had of Beau in this story... and his name is Beau. Isn't that weird? Except I don't really know him very well so I can't account for his personality but looks... definitely. So naturally, I melted :) Beau was my secret love in this story and even though I knew Jordan & Lydia were pratically meant for each other, I still didn't mind Beau one bit.

Jordan & Lydia... or actually just this entire story is so freaking innocent, haha. Like Lydia was actually a little disgusted by that... and I can't believe that Jordan just broke things off just because of that. I guess he just wanted to respect her and didn't want to scare her off but still... breaking up is just a little extreme :x And it doesn't really make sense because he said that he wasn't going to date other girls after their breakup, and if he was than he would choose Lydia but yeah. Guess that went out the window.

Oh well. Everything seemed to work out in the end. Good job. Your story is cute :) Keep up the good work. I noticed that you haven't really updated any of your stories for at least a year so hopefully you haven't abandoned fp :xx

- Alyssa
anastaca chapter 51 . 5/19/2006
wow. to wright about your eating disorder i know what its like i had anirexia and bulimia and my best friend died from cardiact arest her heart stoped. because of her disorder. i realy love your story and understand what it was like.
MissyMay10 chapter 28 . 5/11/2006
Amazing story so far!
kaydanse chapter 60 . 4/26/2006
Oh, wow! This story definitely went on my fave list. It was great. It was so weird though, because there were so many similarities between Lydia and Jordan and me and MY wonderful boyfriend. I mean, like really totally off things, like the reason he broke up with her... We just had a talk about that not two minutes before I got on here to read it (except he didn't break up with me, lol. We just talked about it and made some decisions and stuff. :))! And there's freaky stuff like that all throughout the story.

And I find it really awesome that you made their Christianity a big part of their lives. It gets so tiring reading stories where the teens "fall in love", have sex without a second thought, then break up at the end anyways, but never feel remourseful about it. It kinda brings us down reading that ind of stuff, but your story was really a big encouragement in that aspect. So, great job. Tomorrow, I'll start reading your other stories, lol.

Wow, this is long. I'm sorry. But I just couldn't help it. This is one of the best stories I've read. So keep it up. :)

Have a wonderful day!

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