Reviews for It Was You, Not Me
ruleof-folklore chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
hm...somehow i feel its a little sacharine. needs to be more succint and precise. it just doesn;t hit the dot, because there arealot of poems like this, and you have to make you'rs stand out. try not to use words like 'bitch' in poems unless absolutely necessary, instead you should describe the feeling maybe in mataphors or using imagery. the poem would be better that imrpoving and writing
Lady Selphius chapter 1 . 12/4/2002
Wow! I just love reading poetry, and you can write~!