Why didn't I read this before? It's wonderful... and sad, but wonderful nonetheless.

wow.

that was sad, but at the same time, beautiful.

good job.

Check your spelling. Please. It makes me wince. Newaz, it was nice-if short; did u take something out of the original? Thank Ghwen for threatening u :) or else we'd never get to appreciate this. ~ Raist

Wait... Did you cut out a line? I distinctly remember seeing one that isn't there anymore... I mean, it fit in... *gets over it* OK, I love it. Very well-written, like I could never hope to do. *sob*

kaylana...umm I dunno, it was god but sad, but really good, but now I'm al depressed, but it was good but it was sad, o greif, I'm confused, nowI'm gonna go write somthin depressing too.

...*murmers to self* but it was good, but it was sad, but it was good...

;_;...so sad... I feel like weeping *weep*