Reviews for Lost Soul To myself
SouthernBelle14 chapter 1 . 3/16/2003
This is sad but very good. Keep writing your great at it.
Chancellor Hobbit chapter 1 . 10/10/2002
Wow, this is cool! I've never read anything like it!

~Chancellor Hobbit, formerly known as Laura (for some reason, JapDragon77 is hiding under a rock...LOLZ) D
peddle2024 chapter 1 . 5/30/2002
This is really good. Maybe a little depressing, but good. I never knew someone could write so much about they soul, but you seem to know yours pretty good.
Someone chapter 1 . 5/23/2002
Pretty good, but I still don't think it sounds like its coming from you P
Faltering Hues chapter 1 . 5/22/2002
I've been reading many poems as of late, and yours is..well, short, simply stated, truthful, and you've dazzled me completely. Great poet's are often found in the people who know not that they exist. You are one of those great poets.
EJM chapter 1 . 5/21/2002
I like the concept, but you should learn to make repitition work for you. If you are going to reuse words either grab your theasaurus or use them in a structured frame. Free verse has rules too, haha. I think it would be a lot more powerful if you took away the last line. Not flaming, just constructive criticism? Haha. Keep writing.
Baron Evergrace chapter 1 . 5/21/2002
*Nods appreciatively* Well said, couldn't say it any better myself. Like the images you use, "soulless tears"-brilliant. I like it, something I can relate to in a way.
Ice Nymph Aurphion chapter 1 . 5/21/2002
Nicely said...I like angsties!