It wasn't horrible.. i thought it was the best one you've written. Full of emotion and hate.. well written :)

Hey... That's not bad! Better than I could do, anyway...

On the contrary, I think this is quite good! You must have been very depressed though, it makes you think about life :P

*~*harryhermione4eva*~*

Wow! YOU can't right? Then none of us can! That was great! Keep riting!

Luv, Suga Baby :)

Snce I'm a poet, I'll give advice,

You're actually quite nice.

Yet you are never knowing and all seeing,

You need to find your inner being.

What I mean by this you see,

You cannot want, you must only be.

Wishing never did anyone good,

Not anyone that remember, I could.

Written in immediate rush,

Stting in a chair of plush.

Dare to dream, dare to be, bear to see,

Taht is both you and me.

This was done in about 30 seconds. I'm postin a new one, my dare essay. check ya email girlfriend! _~

its the best poem ever! and i am not just saying that cuz i'm ur friend, its really kewl!

This is interesting. I think its kinda good, bbut if you're actually thinking of suicide, you had better see someone!

hey, this poem is really good, i don't know why you think it needs to be flamed. it's very good. keep writing.

i liked it. but you could develop it more. the ryhmes are very standard and you could, if u want, throw some more complex words in there. i can relate to it a lot. u dont have to take me suggestion, cuz that is all it is.

very nice; great rhyming and descriptions

Wow! That was GREAT! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE! NICE DESCRIPTIONS!