Reviews for Melina and the Babbling Brook
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Interesting story. I liked how you used myth to tell a story of a girl being turned into a babling brook.
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
This was good, maybe just break it into paragraphs more, as it would be easier to read.
Evilstrawberry chapter 1 . 3/13/2003
Good story, has the whole moral thing going and it's intersting to read.
Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 2/13/2002
Don't know what to think.
Sun chapter 1 . 1/5/2001
I liked it. not only was it a good story it had a good moral as well. keep up the good work
Lady Jo chapter 1 . 12/14/2000
i really like it. it's creative!
WRE chapter 1 . 9/24/2000
Awwww cute!