Reviews for This is a
thatkid chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
no emo jk good poem

ps really does sound emo
Perfectly-Insane33 chapter 1 . 1/22/2004
Yeah, sounds familiar, that's almost like the reason I cut myself...great it didn't give me the shivers like some earlier people, I did enjoy it.
AVIGON chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
Interesting make up.

I loved how you explained cutting in a very fragmented, not coherent way, the only way it can be explained to someone, cause it doesn't make "sense".
anon63 chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Wow, very intense!
neverlove again chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
wow and i thought i got life bad...I mean I do but I would never dare cut myself...well i did once but still...i didnt want to do it again. but i've been wanting to die a lot...so i do know where your coming from. so dont feel alone...

ok well im going to stop with that..that poem was great and intence.

Keep up the GREAT work.
RandomPalindrome chapter 1 . 3/16/2003
wow
SireenC chapter 1 . 11/28/2002
Wow, that was intense. The feeling was very real. I liked it. And I know how that can feel. Hopefully you'll find some release in writing, instead of in physical pain.
Jaclyn chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
*shivering* WHOA! That was incredibly powerful...good imagery and emotion. incredible ending. but OHHHH...life isn't so bad...I love it...*hug* please don't hurt yourself! isn't expressing your pain through poetry enough?
babyruth42 chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
i know exactly how you feel. great poem.