|Reviews for My Fall|
| Vuelo chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
oh god i totally know how you feel. Orchestra concert solo... AGH! I like the way you say you'll never forgive these dangling spotilights. Great visual, great "personification" too hehe Very well written.
i like how you put the month and year you wrote stuff... thats helpful
Thanks again for your reveiws!
| Adi chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
WOW! That was amazing... I loved it.
| Zenith Azure chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
Lol! Good work. Just one thing... "preceding one who's made ears bled" isn't correct; "bleed" would be. But that messes it up, so something else could fit...? Anyhow, good poem. Like the rhyme scheme... well done. Keep it up! _