Reviews for It's
Mina Rose chapter 1 . 7/11/2001
I got a little confused not knowing exactly what was going on in this story. I had an idea about what was happening, but not totally. At least I know that you wrote it when you were younger so that might be a reason. My first story (thankfully I never posted it) was ok, but not very descriptive. Now yours was descriptive which was a pretty good thing! Keep on writing!
Christa chapter 1 . 10/27/2000
Wow. I mean...wow. Really incredible.
Neptune chapter 1 . 8/5/2000
Well...it was interesting. Needs some work like you said, but a very good beginning to a story. Not bad for 12. I couldn't write anything when I was 12. Anyways, keep up the good work! ~Neptune~
ElectricPoweredShock chapter 1 . 5/11/2000
Hey, that's pretty neat... I like it. It just needs some better grammer and punctuation...
Iya chapter 1 . 4/30/2000
It was hard to understand. . .with no paragraphs and all.
me chapter 1 . 4/24/2000
That just went straight over my head.
Sumi chapter 1 . 4/19/2000
uh...okay...that was...was...no comment.
Cats 7 chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Hmm... Crazy
LT TRAINR chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
woah that's insane but the start and end correspond