|Reviews for I Won't Be There|
| melinda chapter 3 . 8/30/2013
So I'm only on chapter three and you have already called the son three different names. Eric, Jake, and Jared. Might wanna get that cleared up. I did read another story of yours though and it was wonderful, so I'm going to keep reading. But normally when I see something like with the 3 different names I stop reading right away.
| Sam chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Do you live in Florida?
| moonstar chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
OMG haha this is so funny i did the same thing in my high school i went to the guys locker room but they were already dressed and the frikin p.e teacher got all pissed and called security. i did not get expelled but had to go to detention for one full semester. and when i read the first line i started laughing. because we did the same thing
| Da-zGreen chapter 21 . 1/29/2011
What a great story this was! I'm so glad that you put this on Fictionpress so that we were the first to experience this! Thank you so much! I really love your stories! They are awesome! I hope to read more of your stories... You are great!
| Dustland chapter 4 . 9/15/2010
I love skye :D
..So, in my head they all have country accents, which doesn't exactly make sense...but whatever. :)
| Bitterblue23 chapter 21 . 6/4/2010
| Your Execution chapter 21 . 11/4/2009
AAHHmygod this was so awsome :D
| XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 21 . 10/2/2009
| ghurl00 chapter 21 . 6/3/2009
that story was adorable, i tell you.:))
i lavved it!:))
| simplyanaddiction chapter 5 . 5/9/2009
funny... my name's rachel, too.
the story's going great. even though it was written in 2002, i hope you get this.
| 3DarkGoddess3 chapter 21 . 3/25/2009
Really sweet story. I like all the characters. Jared turned out to be very sweet.
| Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 21 . 1/1/2009
| Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 3 . 1/1/2009
another error :)
you called jared, Jake in this sentence
I waved a hand at her and headed back for the house. Jake was on the porch, talking on the phone. I’m not one to eavesdrop, but I was curious.
Hope this helps
| Angel-Leigh Jones chapter 2 . 1/1/2009
great first chapter and second. I really like your style of writing.
I found a little error i think. In the last paragraph it says that kathy called Lindsay and Eric to dinner. Isn't Eric meant to be Jared?
Can't wait to read the rest.
| christinaxxyo chapter 21 . 12/10/2008
The idea of the story was really good but you had a lot of grammar mistakes and the way you wrote it wasn't the best. It didn't really seem realistic either but besides that, it was pretty good. :)