This is pretty cool.I like all the mythology stuff lol.I hope that you add more soon.

Could you maybe read and review my origonal vampire novel?Thanks if you can and keep writing.

whah! this is getting interesting...politics...power struggles...revenge plots! death, blood, gore...hell, handsome guys! *waves fist* write faster, darn you!

somewhere i read about this legend...not quite in the way you've written...but you've definitely piqued my interest...*toddles off to read more* -

oh curse you for getting block so soon! i'm already entrances, i /love/ the way you wrote the intro before the story actually started, you write like i think! ii often tone my writings down from such becasue i just can't keep it up for a whole story!

And norse Myhology, you realize you had better email everytime you write more to this, right? I've been studying Norse Myth! i've memorized the 24 runes of the elder furthark and i'm working on making and mastering runic cards. i don't suppose you'll be mentioning the runes...perhaps you even know what your rune is? i know i'm ansuz, the "god-rune" lol! I was suspicious when you first mentioned Loki, then frigg (i''ve always called her friga) and odin and the three norns, thor, asgard, midgard, nifelheim...my friends think i'm crazy becasue i can remember words like yggdrailisl, musphelheim, vountenheim (sp?) and ragnorok. its such fun!

alright, i better end this review. you better right more! .~

kaze ryuujin

~~nishikaze no ryuujin - Dragon Lord of the Wind~~

HI HI KEEBLER!

::ahem:: Question? Did my bothersome request to have you tell me all about Norse mythology have something to do with this ficcie, since now you remember all that you may have forgotten? Just a question. But seriously, I absolutely love how you're writing out the myths. Maybe they'll stick into my head for a really long time, if you keep up the way you're writing. I like how you set up the first part, with the trowing of "objects" at Balder, and then cutting to the flashback. It shows that you're very organized. Since you probably, actually you do, know all the stories, i'm guessing you have a pretty good organization as to how you're going to tell it set up in your head. I also like the portrayal of Loki. Gee, i wonder WHY you did so well in writing about HIM. ::whistles:: _ But the description of how Loki wanted to tear Balder apart and your hints of foreshadowing were very good. Keep it up! I have nothing but praise for this piece of work.

Ooh, I like this story. _ Kinda has a bad ending to it, in my opinion, but a good moral. _- Anyway, you've presented it well thus far, very enjoyable. Do continue. _VV