Reviews for Ripples from Raindrops: Patrick
Sanguinesque chapter 1 . 7/31/2002
Wow. Very nice. Even though it was a little confusing is was wonderful. I loved how you spelled a phrase out with the poem. Extremely clever.
Mendelssohn chapter 1 . 5/30/2002
Extremely interesting work! I thought that it was less poetic, but the idea behind it was very good (not to say that it was bad, just a different type). Marvelous!
Newkirk's Heroes chapter 1 . 5/28/2002
Wonderful! I love this one, with its conflicting moments of hatred and...what I'm guessing is...admiration. I don't know, maybe I'm misinterprating (God I spelled that wrong!) it :). Wonderful, though, like all your work. I love your name poems!
Yseulte chapter 1 . 5/28/2002
I love the images you use, and the flow of the poem. And nice touch with the first letter of each line spelling something out _