Reviews for And I Realize
Desecre-Demorte chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
I really, really like your descriptions...very vivid and flavorful! My favorite lines were: "I find nothing but frost, speckling the once-green grass" and "Assumed destination, without a map to guide." Both of these lines bring up very powerful descriptions and emotions. Well done.


*Desecre Demorte*
charredrose chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
wow... i really like this one! you are awesome, i hope you keep writing! though the rhythm isn't quite right here, i like it. the images are vivid and graceful with a certain amount of surpressed emotion. wow, that sounded really... wierd. oh well. what i'm TRYING to say is, i like the poem! keep it up!
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/19/2003
I liked your message.

~Heart of the Sword
soulsearcher chapter 1 . 8/18/2002
Hm, this one is quite thoughtful and deep. Makes you kinda think. You could be great with your talent! Well, you are great at the moment, but you get the drift. Never stop writing!

~searcher of souls~
mya14 chapter 1 . 7/18/2002
WOW! you're really talented! keep writing! _ keep it up
Shadowdancer131 chapter 1 . 6/4/2002
*Claps* Very nice work. I really like the way you write. Keep it up. )