|Reviews for Stars of Destiny|
| SeraphJewel chapter 33 . 1/20/2003
thanx for the advertising! and also, that was a really intense chapter. wow... Melena's... uh... pretty cool... an' i guess i misjudged Emily. love the story!
| Strikepenguin5 chapter 33 . 1/19/2003
Congrtulations, Al, you caught me completely by surprise. I'm just concerned about the possibility of Melena carrying children that are part her and part-uberdemon...
It's too bad that everyone will be etremely leery of Melena from now on... excellent chapter.
| BobCat chapter 33 . 1/19/2003
Oh ho! Nice to see that even though she was eliminated, Gauntlet wasn't forgotten. Also liked the hinting at her origins. Keep up the good work!
| SeraphJewel chapter 32 . 1/10/2003
oh, hooray! Stone is so awesome! Emily seems to me like not a very fair girl. not cool at all what happened with Greg. i will e-mail you about some ideas on pairings. great job, buddy!
| Strikepenguin5 chapter 32 . 1/9/2003
well... I'm suprised that Melena didn't do something else to defeat Mask, but it's good that she doesn't just rely on her strength to beat people.
What happened to poor Greg is just embarassing. The poor guy... Melena needs to wail on Emily for that in the next fight, even if she is "nice" outside the ring. That or she has to fulfil her promise to Greg as a punishment. Or both.
Grand- someone needs to take down Grand. I'm not sure what would be more of a treat to watch- Melena vs. Atman or Melena vs. Grand... assuming Melena can survive or dodge the legendary attack Emily rogue supposedly posesses... but those two fights would be spectacular tournament finales.
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/4/2003
hey dude i like it so far keep it up
| SeraphJewel chapter 31 . 12/30/2002
Woo hoo! That was awesome! I'm glad Stone won! Hooray! But... geez, he doesn't stand a chance against Atman. Just... go easy on him, huh? Stone won't go down easily! it's a little too bad Dustin and Minerva won't face each other. oh, well.
| BobCat chapter 31 . 12/28/2002
Very nice! Kind of an old school Dragonball feel to the whole thing. I particularly appreciate the fact that Gauntlet wasn't eliminated yet. Keep up the nice work!
| SeraphJewel chapter 30 . 12/21/2002
cool! Cool! COOL! Yay! This is... oh, i'm so excited! kick butt, Stone!
| Strikepenguin5 chapter 30 . 12/20/2002
hmmm... possible match-ups...
Seeing Melena take on Sleipnir would be a treat, for various reasons, and it would be supreme irony if one of my characters took down the other...
By the way, nice pun... "lance vs. spear"... that, plus the plot, makes that battle a given...
It is truly impressive how well you recycle characters, Al.
And if Melena fights Seraph Stone, I don't think it will disrupt her ability to fight, but she might ask him out afterwards!
I'm looking forward to this...
| Strikepenguin5 chapter 29 . 12/17/2002
Melena seems to be chanelling Selphie Tilmitt... okay. She's still holding back, though...
I enjoyed reading this, excellent job.
| Peter1 chapter 29 . 12/17/2002
That was a great Chapter and how you did Dana her her mother's Mother Daughter Relationship was very close to what I pictured.
Hope that you are planning either a sequal to 'Stars' or a prequel going into the Final War.
I'm still chuckling at the image of all of this (especially this chapter) in the form of an humorous and adventure anime.
| Taa chapter 29 . 12/10/2002
| SeraphJewel chapter 28 . 12/5/2002
*blinks eyes in shock* that is so cool. it's scary how well you did Dole's character... and all the others too! and Jerwon at his normal height? this is gonna be interesting!
| Taa chapter 28 . 12/3/2002
Ha ha ha! That's way cool. Jerwon's tall and stuff... *cheesy grin*