Reviews for Three Harsh Words
undecided bunny chapter 1 . 8/7/2002
This is Amazing! How you come up with these things i'll Never understand. The formatting idea was Outrageously Genius - i can't believe how cool that was. This is a Great poem!

Fire of the Vampire chapter 1 . 7/18/2002
EEK! I absolutely LOVE the format you did this poem in. I have to go try it! (I'm not stealing-I always try out new things when I see something an author has done and worked out beautifully, like this!) Awesome. Just cause I like typing, I'm gonna tell you how I read it. :P The middle, one verse on the left, then the right-side verse, then the next middle verse, etc. I absolutely LOVE your poetry!

God Bless

Much Love

Later Daze

- Kacie
Penumbra chapter 1 . 6/9/2002
Wow, you are so original! I love the style of this poem...darn, I wish I thought of it first. ;) WRITE MORE!
Ysabell47 not signed in chapter 1 . 6/5/2002
well that was a bugger to read... :P seriously though, really interesting. wasn't sure quite how to read it, so i just sort of dived in there, and i was very impressed. how lovely! Never ever seen anything like this before. well done! true originality very very rare these days. thanks :)
Moonstruck1 chapter 1 . 6/5/2002
This was beyond clever. I loved it! You're very talented. My goodness, I don't what to say. It was...I liked it. WOW! I think I'll just leave it at that.
BrokenPanda chapter 1 . 6/5/2002



That is just... it's so... the way you... when you said... in the line...

why, its left me speechless.

The formatting is brilliant, the slight repitition, wonderful, the choice you give the reader in not only how to take the context, but how to take it IN is inspiring...

This poem's greatness is indescribable(sp)... I think if were to attempt it, i would fail miserably.

Zemmiphobic chapter 1 . 6/4/2002
hahahah! i love how this is written- wasn't choppy to read and it's awesome how some of the words overlap like in the first line where you have "If I could go back in time" then the point of views spilt, then come together- it's awesome how you can do that! i love this poem! 10 stars!
Suzanne Star chapter 1 . 6/4/2002
Oh wow, that is really really kewl. I LOVE the so much to the poem. And I don't know what to say about this poem that can possibly be enough...I like it, a lot.