|Reviews for parachutes|
| Newkirk's Heroes chapter 1 . 6/4/2002
Never heard of the Dance Dance Revolution machine. Perhaps it's because the newest thing my town got was electricity...
ANyway...this is lovely. The last line is beautiful...those little touches of a person. I am so glad you're writing poetry again...I so love your work! This is great
| Zemmiphobic chapter 1 . 6/4/2002
this is odd...yet it makes perfect sense- i love the lines "we kicked out the master/so the mice can play/can play/can play/watch the blind mice dance"- there's something eerie about them- probally because of the play "the mousetrap" by agtha christie- i love this! you have such talent-such a way with words