Reviews for If It Doesn't
Aerak3024 chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
I like it. especially that last stanza. it is very good.
Lisa Robinson chapter 1 . 6/10/2002
Very Good! Excellent Creative-ness _
Penumbra chapter 1 . 6/9/2002
Simple and sweet...I love poems that can make me smile. You're so good at making rhyming poems...lucky you! _ The last stanza is the most thought-provoking; it best illustrates the thing about getting over someone...keep up the great work!
Terra Tigra chapter 1 . 6/8/2002
Nice poem MJ! This is the first rhyming poem you have written in a while, I like it. Great stuff MJ! Thumbs!


-Terra Tigra-

Zemmiphobic chapter 1 . 6/7/2002
hehehe- another love poem-this is cute! i like about the mason jar instead of the bottle- i love know i'm bad at reviews...anyways i really do like this!
Suzanne Star chapter 1 . 6/7/2002
Hmm...I totally get it. It's really good...I like the last two lines. :)
Tara Cools chapter 1 . 6/6/2002
i like it! awesome poem! keep up the great work!