And to this day I wonderTo all it lures outside

That part makes me think of a siren's song. The whole poem is very beautiful with a wonderful command of the language. I'm curious to know what the piece of music that inspired this is, though.

Although the meter isn't strictly adhered to, this poem is excellent. I am very curious as to what song you're writing about. If you could, please email me the name of the song so I, too, may be able to experience this apparently amazing piece.

Wow, that is very cool. I wish I could write poetry like that... :)