Reviews for November Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() how can you write this much of a story then just stop because it doesn't suit you anymore? sorry if im sounding like a bitch but i actually like to know how stories end. i would read your other version of this but considering there are only 5 chapters and you haven't updated in a little over 4 years that would be more of a waste of time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope you update |
![]() ![]() ![]() EXCELLENT STORY. |
![]() ![]() Wow.I was checking out this site and stumbled upon your story...woowowowowow!Your born to be a writer! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I first saw this story and started to read it because of the title "november rain" and guns n' roses happens to be one of my favorite bands. but the more i read, the more i came to love the story and the characters. the love that Audrey and Brandon share is deep and touching. PLEASE! I BEG YOU! WRITE MORE! it's so addictive! i LOVE it! you are a great writer and dont let anyone tell you different! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey , your story is very moving.. i like it a lot review my story fiction general showdown |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great beginning. I can already tell that I am going to love this story. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. Off I go... ~V~ Oh, and I love the last bit. About the movies. It's cute, her reaction to his suggestion. |
![]() ![]() When are you gonna update? *whines* |
![]() ![]() write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() must write more! |
![]() ![]() please update soon! i love this story! you can feel a direct connection with Audrey, as most teenagers feel this way, locked up to be kept innocent. i am intrigued by this story and hope you update it soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow.. I didn't think I'd read this far threw it. I suspected right away Daniels was gay.. lol In spite of my earlier review, I'd like to say I'm happy with the questions I needed answered. And that the gun-thing didn't last. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just have one question so far, which may be answered in later chapters; They used contraceptives... right? I was also a bit offended about the gun-thing on Audrey's part. Truth be told, I don't know if I can finish this story or not. It skips from place to place and there's not much description and you never explained WHY Audrey was hanging out in a lawfirm in the first place, and what she does in the 5 hours between school and the place. This story is so confusing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Weird chapter, but a good chapter, of course. I'm glad to see that you finally updated. _ Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short chapter, but you finally updated! YAY! Man, Audrey's mom has promblems 0.o ~*The Moonlight Sage*~ |