Oooh, I'm feeling pity for this guy...he killed the woman he loved and hated. Nice story still, keep it up.~CT

Nice, nice. Love your characters and everything. Keep going...I'll be sure not to take as much time on this one.~CT

Whoa! I'm finally glad to access your profile after what seems like forever! Anyway, cool beginning. Once again, it'll take me time like it did with "Strange Glue". Nice job. Keep it up.~CT

Wow... This is, in my opinion, the best story I have ever read on this site. No kidding. I absolutely LOVED your last two chapters, they were both magnificent! I can't wait for you to write more, I want to see what happends next! I'll be waiting for your next update!

what happen's next?

what happen's next?

This story kicks major ass!It seems so,so,*what's the word*.. it's not ametuer but it got published,when you finish it you should publish it!

The whole plot of this story I found so capturing because it's not one of those 'boy meets girl,falls in love,they are best of friends'..naw these guys are murders and they fight!I LOVE IT!

And if I don't see a new chapter soon...your mailbox will be so full of update soon emails,you'll want to kill me!Ahahahahaha.

So,with that I end this reveiw,but just remember..update!

What an excellent story! I was browsing through the original fiction section and I chanced upon reading your summary. Am I ever grateful! This is a wonderful story - completely different from any I have read. You capture the characters perfectly and the plot is riveting. Please continue with this, I am eager to see where it will go!

~Susan

AngelSDP

The plot just keeps getting more and more interesting by the moment! Gosh, you can write so quickly! Well, compared to me at least... I love your characters and this story! This is going on my favorites list! (took long enough, huh?)

Oh wow. Very good. Very very good. This is so origanal...Remind me again why your not published?

I loved this chapter! I can't wait to figure out what happens! Please update soon! This is such a wonderful story, and believe me, that's so hard to find on this site. Good job on this chapter!

I like it a lot overall, but just one tip. You have a lot of clever little descriptions, but a few of them have appeared twice and felt a little redundant. Her unconsciously mimicking Jonothan , hair or hood like a pool of oil, describing things as aneamic. Don't take offense, I really like your style and you are a good writer, I just thought I'd point that out.

I love this story so much! You're doing wonderfully with this, your characters, plot, description, everything! You are such a talented writer! I can't wait until you update again! I'll be awaitin'.

Cliffhanger! How can you do that! No really, I'm alright, but I really hope you update soon so I can find out what happens next. As always, I love this story! Write more soon!

Oooo I love your story so far you've gotta write the next chapter!